Oh my! It felt all real, perfect diction! Yes, I love your choice of words. Poignant.

by crownsqalam

I thought at first the main character was just looking for him/herself or his/her worth as a person, but in the end it turned out to be more exciting. I love it, and I can say that it's worth reading.

@ReymondWrites

Succulent and knitted with exciting sentiments.

by Crownsqalam